Brenda Drake, Shelly Walters and Cassandra Marshall recently held a PitchMadness contest where agents got to bid on 60 pitches posted on three blogs.
When reading the PitchMadness entries, they noticed the entries that didn't make it to the agent match was because the first words weren't hooking them. There wasn't a unique element to pull them in, the setting was right but the action was too familiar, or the story started in the wrong place. So they decided to do another workshop focusing solely on the opening page.
And YAtopia jumped in to help, joining Brenda Drake, Shelley Watters and Erica Chapman in critiquing your opening words on our sites this month.
Brenda Drake
Shelley Watters
Erica Chapman
Here how it's going down...
If you want to join in, sign up on the linky below. Remember your entry will be placed on our blogs and critiqued not only by us but also by your peers. We're accepting up to Brenda Drake
Shelley Watters
Erica Chapman
Here how it's going down...
(edit - there was so much demand with the first 40 spots filling up so quickly that we've increased it to 60)
Only the first
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Signed up, and entry e-mailed! (I'm supposed to comment, right...?)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Adelle! It's not required to comment, but we love it anyway. :)
DeleteSigned up too, I hope it's okay I sent 265, 250 was the middle of the sentence. XD
ReplyDeleteHaha, Laura. Mine was 251, and I was like, "I think that's okay?" :P
ReplyDeleteThis is so cool, Wendy! What a great idea!
ReplyDeleteGreat idea. I'm excited to get the first 250 of my latest MS critiqued.
ReplyDeleteAwesome opossum!
ReplyDeleteYay! Thank you! I sent mine in already!
ReplyDeleteI signed up and emailed the first 250. Looking forward to it! Thank you!
ReplyDeleteLooks like we're at our limit! That was quick. :)
ReplyDeleteNumber 44... grrr! But I still signed up to show that there is enough interest for another round. ^_^
ReplyDeleteThey've increased the limit to 60 because of the amount of interest, so YOU'RE IN!
DeleteGood idea! You never know what will happen...
ReplyDeleteOh yay! Emailing right now.
ReplyDeleteDarn... so upset that I missed this opportunity.
ReplyDeleteThanks for hosting though ladies :) It is always super helpful to have these!