Showing posts with label YA writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label YA writing. Show all posts

Wednesday, May 30, 2018

GUESTOPIA: YA Debut Author, Kit Mallory


It’s Guestopia time again! Today, I am delighted to introduce you to an awfully talented young person whose words you should absolutely read. Immediately. Please meet...

KIT MALLORY





Kit is a YA author living in Devon, UK. She writes speculative fiction about underdogs, kickass girls who love other girls, and mental health. Her first novel, BLACKOUT, was shortlisted for the 2016 Mslexia Children's Novel Competition and longlisted for the 2016 Bath Children's Novel Award. She has a secret alter ego who works as a mental health nurse, and was almost certainly a mermaid in a former life.


Awesome! Right, let’s get straight down to business... 


Is this your first published book?

Yes! Which is both incredibly exciting and kind of terrifying.


What’s it called?

Blackout.


Which genre?

It’s YA speculative fiction; technically dystopian, but in a very near future, close-to-home sort of way.


Which age group?

14 up, I’d say.


Is it a series or standalone?

At the moment it’s looking like a duology – I’m working on the sequel right now.


Are you an agented author?

Nope!


Which publisher snapped up your book?

It’s indie published.


How involved have you been in the whole publishing process of your book?

Very, since I’m an indie author (and my goodness has that been a massive learning curve!).


Do you have another job? 

Yes! I’m a mental health nurse who specialises in cognitive behavioural therapy.


Did you receive many, if any, rejections prior? 

Yes, quite a few. I got a lot of really positive – even glowing – feedback from agents, as well as making it to the shortlist of the 2016 Mslexia Children’s Novel Competition, but ultimately got a lot of feedback about it not being right for where the market was at the time. I still believed in my characters and my writing, though – and in fact the feedback I was getting gave me the confidence to believe that Blackout was worth sticking with. I also believe very strongly that LGBTQ teens and teens with mental health problems really need to see themselves represented in more and better ways in YA fiction, and ultimately getting my story into the hands of those readers was the most important thing to me, so I decided to release it myself.


What created/what were you doing or watching when the first idea for this book sneaked up on you?

It was 2012 and at the time I lived up in York (in the north of England, for those abroad!) – and what came into my head was a story about a girl who lived in a cellar and who was furious at the world and everything around her. That girl turned out to be Skyler, and I knew very early on that hers was a story I wanted to tell. The original inspiration for the setting and the concept of the Wall came from the Berlin Wall, which I’ve always been fascinated by, the concept of the UK’s north/south divide, and a long-held wondering about what might happen when fossil fuels start running out.


How long did you plot/plan until you started writing it? 

I didn’t! I’m very much a pantser, and I always start with the characters first – I think once you know your characters well enough to know how they’ll respond in any given situation, the story starts to unfold naturally. I prefer to work that way rather than trying to force the characters to behave in a way that fits the plot. It feels like going on an adventure with them, and I love that.


Once you started, did the story flow naturally or did you have to step in and wrestle it into submission? 

It flowed to a point, and then it got to a point plot-wise where I had to sit down and really think about the logistics of what was going to happen next. The point where I tend to get stuck is the point at which I realise I’ve written my characters into a predicament I might not be clever enough to get them out of…


How many drafts did you write before you let someone read it? Who was that someone?

When I was writing the first draft I shared snippets with a friend who was also drafting a novel. It took a good couple of years before I was brave enough to show another friend the whole thing!


Did you employ an editor/proofreader or did you have a critique partner/beta readers before you started querying?

I have been incredibly lucky in having a whole bunch of amazing critique partners and beta readers who gave me feedback on various drafts of the manuscript. I was also part of an author’s collective to whom I owe an awful lot of credit for helping me develop as a writer. Blackout wouldn’t be the book it is – and I wouldn’t be the writer I am today – without the help of my incredible friends and CPs.


Roughly how many drafts did it take before you sent the manuscript off into the real world?

At a rough estimate, approximately twenty million.


How many drafts until it was published?

Forty million? I was still doing edits even after I got the first proof copy through! That might have been the biggest learning curve of all, actually – learning to let go once and for all.


Has the book changed dramatically since the first draft?

Oh, God, yes. The main bones of the plot haven’t really changed, but the detail and nuance have changed a LOT. And I basically learned how to write as I was writing it, so in terms of the actual writing, it’s changed a bunch.




Are there any parts you’d like to change even now?

I haven’t gone back and read it again since it was published because I know as soon as I do I’ll find something I want to change – honestly I suspect that will be the case with everything I ever write. Tolerating the knowledge that it’ll never be perfect – there’ll always be some way I can make it better, and the more I learn and develop my writing, the more I’ll notice those ways – has been one of the hardest parts of the whole process.


What part of writing do you find the easiest?

Getting to know the characters and their voices, I think. Emotion-driven scenes are my favourite ones to write.


What part do you find hardest?

Complicated plot stuff (you know, the bits where my characters have to be smarter than I am). Ignoring the voice of self-doubt. Knowing when to stop editing!


Do you push through writing barriers or walk away?

It depends what they are. If I’m avoiding something because it’s difficult or anxiety-provoking, I know that facing it head on is what’s going to get me through it and out the other side. When I’m stuck on a plot point, though, for example, I know that often the best thing to do is step away and do something totally different to give myself time to process things without forcing it. If I do that, I can generally trust that the answer will come to me at some point (it happened in the shower just the other day!).


How many projects do you have on the go at the same time?

Currently in the works I’ve got: the sequel to Blackout, the first in a YA contemporary fantasy series that needs revisions, a partially-written draft of another standalone work, and a short story that’s nagging me to be turned into a novel. So I should be all set for the next five years or so…


Do you think you’re born with the talent to write or do you think it can be learned

I think it’s a bit of both – I definitely think the technical aspects can be learned, and no matter how naturally talented you are you can always learn more and improve your craft. That obsessive drive you need to not only actually finish a novel but to redraft it over and over until it’s what you want it to be – that I don’t think you can learn.


How many future novels do you have planned?

*counts on fingers* As of right now, at least five.


Do you write other things, such as short stories, articles, blogs, etc?

I’m not great at brevity, so short stories aren’t my natural forte, but I do write them sometimes. I also blog about book stuff, LGBTQ stuff, and mental health stuff at www.kitmallory.wordpress.com. I’ve just started a new blog post series over there on writing mental health representation (and I’m taking requests for post subjects!).


What’s the highlight of being published so far? 

Hands down, it’s been getting feedback from readers that Blackout has connected with them in some way. People have been really positive about the representation, which has been amazing because that was something I was really concerned about getting right. Somebody live-tweeted their reactions as they read the book on its release day, which was just absolutely delightful; someone else let me know they’d asked their local library to buy a copy. That feeling – that I created something that people have enjoyed, that’s made them feel seen, that they’ve taken the time to share that with me and let others know about it – it’s been absolutely magical, and without a doubt, it’s made the entire journey 100% worthwhile.


Give me one writing tip that works for you.

Find your people; the ones who can both lift you up and challenge you. Learn to love criticism – it’s the key to becoming a better writer – but don’t forget to embrace and celebrate your strengths and the positive feedback you get just as much.


And one that doesn't.

I’ve never been convinced about the whole “write every day” thing. Self-care is the most important thing. If that rule works for you, awesome; but don’t push yourself to stick to a rigid set of rules because you think that’s what you *should* be doing.


Can you give us a clue or secret about the next book?

Blackout’s sequel – I really need to come up with a damn title! – is my first ever multi-POV novel, with four viewpoint characters. You’ll get to see through both some familiar eyes and some new ones as the gang attempt to deal with the aftermath of the first book’s events.


What question have you always wanted to be asked but never have? What would the answer be?

I’ve heard a lot from readers about who their favourite character in Blackout is (there’s definitely a common theme!) but I don’t think I’ve talked about who mine is! Although I love all three of the main characters in Blackout, Skyler definitely has a special place in my heart. She’s the very definition of an unlikeable heroine – she’s selfish and stubborn and a total pain in the ass sometimes - but those qualities, actually, have allowed her to survive in incredibly difficult circumstances and I love the fact that she knows full well how smart and talented she is and she never apologises for who she is. At the same time, I think she grows and changes a LOT throughout the book and that takes a lot of courage on her part.



Fantastic! What a great interview. Thank you so much for joining us today, Kit, and we wish you all the best with Blackout, its sequel, and all the rest that follow.

If you would like to find out more about Kit and grab a copy of Blackout (which you should), these links should help:

Amazon US

Books 2 Read 






Friday, September 22, 2017

Villainous Struggles



Writing villains might come easy to some people, but creating a well-rounded, believable, (hopefully charismatic) villain is something I have to put a lot of careful thought and planning into. Protagonists and love interests often jump into my mind fully-formed, like Athena popping from Zeus’ head, but villains evade me. I think it is because for so long, I put my characters into categories such as those I just mentioned: protagonists, love interests, family members, friends and villains. And the reason why my villains just weren’t working was because I was treating them as such.

That’s when I realized…

NO ONE IS THE VILLAIN IN THEIR OWN STORY.

So, you know that sexist, pig-headed idiot who just hollered at you when you walked past them? In their head, they’re not the villain of that situation. They will go back home to their own story with their own justifications (however misguided) for shouting at people on the street. There are millions of personalities in this world, but most people don’t go around believing they’re evil. No one does evil deeds for evil’s sake. Take Voldemort, for example, who is pretty evil in my opinion… even old Voldy has a tragic past and quite a sad story following him into adulthood. He has reasons for believing the things he does and has been shaped by the events that have befallen him. OK so his twisted personality has meant that those events have turned him into a no-nosed, back-of-Quirrell’s-head weirdo, but the point is that we, the reader, understand to a degree what contributed to Voldemort’s villainy.

Many of the most iconic villains in books and TV have their own stories, which is what makes them so engaging to the reader/watcher. Having someone do ‘bad things’ isn’t enough to make your reader want to see their demise – we want to know their goals so we can rejoice when they’re scuppered, and their reasons for being the way they are so we can understand them in a sense.

Another brilliant example of this is Cersei from Game of Thrones. I won’t give away any spoilers, but we can all agree that Cersei is an awful human being. She has done atrocities that definitely place her in the ‘evil’ category. However, she is so damn interesting! She loves her children and family and puts them above all others, and is completely unapologetic about this fact. Despite her fortunate upbringing in terms of being ‘born well’, she has been discriminated against her whole life because of her gender, being forced to marry someone she despised instead of inheriting anything of her own right. Cersei has suffered hardships in her life, and therefore we understand why she has hardened into the person she is, even if we hate her!

When it comes to writing your villain, I would think of the word ‘antagonist’ instead, which derives from the Greek tragedy Antigone. Antigone is actually the protagonist of her own story, but she is seen to Creon as an antagonist as she doesn’t want to obey his rules and goes against his goals. This shows that your antagonist doesn’t have to be ‘bad’, they just need to want to stop the protaganist from reaching their goals.

Essentially, writing a good baddie is just like writing your goodie – you need to know who they are, what their history is, why they act the way they do and what they want to achieve.

Make us hate them. Make us understand them. Make us love to hate them. And make us rejoice when your protagonist triumphs over them.

Tuesday, July 25, 2017

GUESTOPIA: Multi-published author Karen King

Karen King


It's Guestopia time for July and our first guest this month comes in the form a prolific and talented author. Please meet Karen King.



Karen King is the author of over 120 children's books and has had two YAs published, Perfect Summer and Sapphire Blue. Perfect Summer was runner up in the Red Telephone Books YA novel competition in 2011 and has just been republished by Accent Press.

Karen is also the author of two romance novels, and has been contracted for three chick lit novels by Accent Press. The first, I do?... or do I? was published in 2016 and the second, The Cornish Hotel by the Sea, has just been released. In addition, Karen has written several short stories for women’s magazine and worked for many years on children’s magazines such as Thomas the Tank Engine and Winnie the Pooh as well as the iconic Jackie magazine.

When she isn’t writing, Karen likes travelling, watching the ‘soaps’ and reading. Give her a good book and a box of chocolates and she thinks she’s in Heaven.


And here's the interview...



Is this your first published book?

No, I’ve had about 120 children’s books published, two YA, two romance novels, two chicklits and there’s another chicklit in the process of publication.

What’s it called?

Perfect Summer

Which genre?

Dystopian

Which age group?

12+ there’s some gritty scenes!

Is it a series or standalone?

It’s a standalone

Are you an agented author?

No – although I have had agents in the past and may again in the future.

What created/what were you doing or watching when the first idea for this book sneaked up on you?

I’ve been concerned for a long time about the pressure society puts on people to have perfect looks then I read a magazine article about girls as young as four or five worrying that they were too fat or too ugly. I thought that was really sad. I started wondering what would happen if people got so obsessed with physical perfection that it became a ‘crime’ to be different in any way. Another concern of mine is how disabled people are treated, so both these concerns sowed the seeds of this story.

How long did you plot/plan until you started writing it?

I always plan a bit first. I write character profiles to make sure I really know my characters well and don’t change their eye or hair colour halfway through the story. Then I work out a plot outline so I know roughly where the story is going, and then I start writing it up.

Once you started, did the story flow naturally or did you have to step in and wrestle it into submission?

I started writing the story in third person at first but I felt that it wasn’t flowing right so I changed to the first person and I was away.

Has the book changed dramatically since the first draft?

Not dramatically, the basis of the story is the same. It’s more refined I guess. I rarely change the plot when I’ve revising, but I do change some phrases that I think aren’t flowing right, or make scenes more dramatic/concise.

What part of writing do you find the easiest?

Getting the initial idea. I have notebooks full of ideas.

What part do you find hardest?

Finding the time to write up the ideas. Then getting the story out of your head and onto the screen/page!
Do you push through writing barriers or walk away?

It depends. If I’m on a deadline I’ll write through them. If I’m not I’ll turn to something else for a while then I go back with a fresh mind and can usually find that the story flows okay again.

How many projects do you have on the go at the same time?

Three or four. I like a variety, and it helps stave off writer’s block if you have another project to turn to.

Do you think you’re born with the talent to write or do you think it can be learned?

That’s a difficult one. I’m a writing tutor and basically believe that writing is a skill, so like all skills it can be learned or improved – especially article and feature writing. Story writing, however, is different. You need that spark of imagination, that kernel of tale-spinning inside you, the ability to make a story out of thin air. If someone has that they can be helped to improve how they write their story down but that basic storytelling kernel of imagination can’t be taught.

How many future novels do you have planned?

I’m working on three at the moment, and also a couple of short stories.

Do you write other things, such as short stories, articles, blogs, etc?

Yes, I write short stories and blog posts. I also run a blog called The Writer’s Surgery, where I post articles and tips to help new writers.

What’s the highlight of being published so far?

Signing a three book contract for chicklits with Accent Press, two of the books, I do?...or do I? and The Cornish Hotel by the Sea are now out. The third will be out next year.

Give me one writing tip that work for you.

Just write. Get your first draft down then go back and revise it afterwards.

And one that doesn't.

Write drunk, edit sober – a famous tip by Ernest Hemingway

What question have you always wanted to be asked but never have? What would the answer be?

Can we make your book into a film? The answer would be yes!


Excellent! I imagine most authors want to be asked this, and I expect their answers would be the same too! Thank you so much for joining YAtopia today, Karen. We wish you all the best with your chick lit and YA novels.
Here's a little about Karen's latest YA, with some links to help...


Set in a society obsessed with perfection, 15-year-old Morgan is best friends with the seemingly perfect Summer. But when Morgan’s brother, Josh, who has Down’s syndrome, is kidnapped, they uncover a sinister plot and find themselves in terrible danger.

Can they find Josh before it’s too late? And is Summer’s life as perfect as it seems?


And if you would like to find out more about Karen and her work, these links might help as well!

Twitter: @karen_king