Although I’m a freelance editor and get to read and work on
unpublished manuscripts as my day job (I know, it rocks!), it’s still not
enough. So, I often offer to beta read for authors with an early, and later, draft of a
novel. It’s what I like to do with my free time.
To be honest, I have to beta read all the
books I've been instructed to edit as well because the same initial process
applies. I need to read and understand the story and the characters, and consider how
it makes me feel from a reader’s point of view before I delve into any edits.
Other than the usual considerations of characterisation and
depth, of structure and plot, and so on, here’s some more general things I do and consider before, during and after a beta read.
I’ll pretty much beta read any genre. Why not? If anything,
it might introduce me to a category or genre I’d never have considered before.
Plus, my eyes will be fresh and completely unbiased in my review. You don't have to be an expert to read a person's book, just being prepared to give honest feedback is qualification enough.
As I read, I do my best to make very few notes. I don’t when
I read a published book I buy from Amazon or a bookstore, and so it's essential I apply the same reading attitude to an unpublished book. Otherwise, I run the
risk of losing any enjoyment the story might give me as I’m too busy fussing over
technicalities. My notes might simply consist of ‘passive’ or ‘telling’ or
‘repeating xxxx’ or ‘dialogue unnatural’ and so on. And I love to highlight.
I’ll only make more detailed notes if there’s a section of
the book I have to re-read or go back to check; it’s a sign that that
particular scene or element isn’t working or perhaps there’s an inconsistency
somewhere. Sometimes it could be my own situation, i.e. misbehaving
children, snoring husband, etc., that prevents me from following the story, but
more often than not, my instincts are right.
I focus on the look of the words on the page. Is there a lot
of attractive and calming white space? Is there a range of sentence lengths? Do
the paragraphs vary in size? Is there plenty of dialogue? That
kind of thing. Because appearance affects a reader’s mindset and attitude when
they read; it needs to appeal visually, just like a good dinner does before we
tuck in!
My reports often babble on, I can't help it, it’s habit, but I do try my
hardest to be as brief as possible in the initial contact. But I’ll say to the
author, that if they’d like me to go into more detail on any specific points,
then they only need to ask. I keep my door wide open to anyone I beta for,
because rewrites are blinking hard, and if I can support in any way possible
throughout, answering any questions or discussing a new idea or direction, then
I will.
Above all else, I look for the positives and the strengths in the story and the author’s writing. Not only because encouragement and support is pretty much everything for an author at this stage with a WIP, but also because, for me, it actually makes it easier to weed out the weaker areas. I like my reports to feed back on what the author’s doing right as much as what they might need to work on.
Beta reading is a wonderful thing, and a gift
every author and reader can give. To be a good writer, we need to read as much and as
diversely as possible. And if we can occasionally do this whilst helping and guiding our
fellow authors, everyone’s onto a winner.
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