Check out Jen's interview below. If you think your manuscript is a good match, feel free to leave a short pitch of approximately 35 words (and only the pitch!) in the comments.
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If Jen wants to see more, she'll let you know. You can then send Jen your query along with any other requested materials to the submissions email below. Don't forget to put 'Agentopia' somewhere in your subject line!
Although she became an agent only recently, Jen Hunt has been in the publishing world for quite some time. With B.A, In English Literature from the University of Reno, Nevada, she started out as a reviewer for Divertir Publishing and ended as the Acquisitions Editor where she saw several books from start to publication. Even though that process was rewarding, Jen always had the desire to not be a step in their journey, but apart of it. To share an author's highs and lows, through every project. Thankfully, Jordy and Brittany gave her that opportunity to live her dream and it is amazing.
To query Jen: query[at]thebookeralbertagency[dot]com
1. What are you looking for in YA/MG submissions right now?
I want strong characters that don't cry all the time. Angst is fine but I don't want a lovesick teenager. Why? Bookstores are drowning in those. They're a dime a dozen. Let's not chase genres, let's trend set! I want something clean for the age range. Also, and this might ruin a lot of my submissions, nothing in high school. I know, I know - but I hated high school growing up. Put that environment in a different era/time/place and I am very interested. At Divertir, Tony Russo is about to put out YA Diesel-punk where the female lead goes to flight school and it has a high school feel. THAT'S what I want (I was VERY lucky to edit that one). Give me scene setting with unique detail (as in not cliche) and a decently flushed out world.
2. What's an immediate turn-off in a query, something guaranteed to get the author rejected?
Let me approach this a different way. If a query is straight forward, clean, and linear, I will most likely read the first few lines of the attached story. A query all over the place without any idea who the main characters are, their plight, and what they need to overcome usually results in me clicking over to the next email. I like simple and straight forward. Also, submitting to me what's not in my genre. No horror, straight thriller, sex, etc. As an author, I understand how important and special it is to be championed by an agent, but if an author cannot take the time to write a clean query, I won't give them my time. Do your homework.
3. What's the story got to have to make you want to represent it?
That is a tough one. I don't want retellings of the same plot lines. Give me age ranges in places we normally don't see. Give me unique descriptions, things described in your own voice. Keep one POV per chapter/section.
If Jen sounds like the agent for you, please leave your pitch below in the comments. Good luck!
Title: Threads of Fate: The Shadow of Allistor Cobb
ReplyDeleteCategory & Genre: Young Adult Historical Fantasy
Word count: 58,000
Pitch: Through the power of an ancient tapestry, Hannah discovers that she is loved by two men, one of whom possesses a dark secret. She must unravel a cryptic poem to protect those she loves from a century of lies and heartache.
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DeleteThis looks interesting. Please send me a query with the first 15 pages.
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ReplyDeleteTitle: Sorina Gomorrah
ReplyDeleteCategory & Genre: Young Adult Fantasy
Word Count: 70,000
Pitch: In a roaming carnival of debauchery, sixteen-year-old Sorina’s more-real-than-not imaginary friends are her family and the cast of her freak show. When one is murdered, Sorina must determine how to kill someone who doesn’t exist.
Title: The Destiny Matrix
ReplyDeleteCategory & Genre: YA Science Fiction
Word Count: 83,000
Pitch: Sixteen-year-old Jason Martyr has a rare genetic ability for time travel. Abducted by a covert agency to become their operative, he must prevent a 1937 coup attempt against FDR or history gets a fascist makeover.
Interesting idea. Please send me a query with the first 15 pages.
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ReplyDeleteTitle: Given To The Wind -- Book One: Khamsin
ReplyDeleteCategory & Genre: YA Heroic Fantasy Romance
Word Count: 100,000
Pitch: Dark amber skin; eyes fire opal blue, Mother-marked & abandoned,Thea, sixteen, seeks to ascend as Venari, a horse warrior. Will she be swept up into the ancient feud between two lands or become a path to peace?
Ohh yes please. Query and first 15 pages :)
DeleteTitle: A ROYAL TREASURE HUNT
ReplyDeleteCategory & Genre: Middle Grade Fantasy Adventure
Word count: 36,000
Pitch: A sorcerer, starving creatures, and sentient weather won't stop a twelve-year-old princess from saving her best friend, the farmer’s son... right?
Please query :)
DeleteTitle: Dreaming of Daniel
ReplyDeleteGenre: YA
word count: 75000
Pitch: Mer and Human worlds collide when Ava meets Daniel. A secret friendship is torn asunder when the Mer laws mean a hard choice.
Title: Abolition
ReplyDeleteGenre: YA Contemporary SciFi
Word Count: 66 000
Pitch: The colored lines predestining everyone's lives will be used to ignite a war. To protect his adoptive father, Kirk jumps off his line and allies with the people trying to stop it. Matrix meets Sims.
.Please send me a query and the first 15 :)
DeleteTitle: The Backsliders
ReplyDeleteCategory & Genre: YA Sci-Fi
Word count:98,000
Pitch:
2019: Great Britain closed its borders, expelling all foreign influence.
2022: 17-year-old Thea Mimieux wants one thing: to escape. While Alice just wants to escape her Victorian-esque courtship- Prince Charming he is not.
Please send me a query and the first 15 :)
DeleteTitle: THE BLOOD BARRIER
ReplyDeleteCategory and Genre:YA Urban Fantasy
Word count: 79,000
Pitch: In a world where mutated children are sold or taken, Sixteen-year-old blood-shifter Haley’s a hot commodity. However, her schizophrenia drives her to destroy until she finds a mutant-born dog who shields her from the voices.
.Please send me a query and the first 15 :)
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ReplyDeleteTitle: RAZOR'S EDGE
Category & Genre: YA Thriller
Word count: 60K
Pitch:
1 high school senior
1 slightly older sister, the continual fuck-up, 13 days missing
1 radical church, the last known location
1 cute guy, willing to help
If Rachel’s not careful, she might vanish too.
Title: Dirty Rainbow
ReplyDeleteCategory/Genre: YA Science Fiction
Word Count: 55,000
Pitch: Mechayns freak out Jenna, but she should be afraid of the one who ordered their creation--her mother. When her best friend is taken she discovers just how evil her mother is.
Please send me a query and the first 15 :)
DeleteTitle: KILLER POTENTIAL
ReplyDeleteCategory/Genre: YA literary thriller
Word Count: 79,000
Pitch:
Pills, knives, and nuts, oh my. Seventeen-year-old Yvette is freaking psycho, a master of passive-aggressive vengeance, and, unless she cooperates, also a convicted murderer. SERIAL meets The Particular Sadness of Lemon Cake.
Title: Snipe Hunt
ReplyDeleteCategory: Fantasy/Sci-Fi
Word Count: 100,00
When Michael and a few others decide to play the old 'snipe hunt' on their friends, they're surprised to discover something really is lurking in the woods--a hound of the Old Gods unleashed upon the earth to prepare for their return...and to hunt.
Title:The Marvelous Adventures of Gwendolyn Gray
ReplyDeleteCategory & Genre: MG Fantasy
Word count: 80,000
Pitch: When Gwendolyn's daydreams come to life, Faceless Men come to erase her brain and her imaginary world full of new friends. Now she must harness her imagination to save her friends, both worlds, and herself.
Title: INFINITUM
ReplyDeleteGenre: YA Romance
Word count: 99k
19-year-old Harlow discovers an alternate universe through meditation. Existing in two realities, she must choose between two loves. Will she decide on the human, or the multidimensional being?
Please send me a query and first 15 :)
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ReplyDeleteTitle: Beneath The Everdawn Sky
ReplyDeleteGenre: YA Fantasy
Word count: 115K
Pitch:
16-year-old Lucas thought a broken heart was worth dying over. He never expected to wind up in a beautiful, magical city called Hell as fighter and a champion, but moving up the ranks to where he's no longer considered worthless means he has to kill the girl he hasn't forgotten, or stopped loving.
Please send me a query and first 15 :)
ReplyDeleteTitle: RIHM
ReplyDeleteGenre: YA Science fiction
Word count: 76,000
Pitch: Dr. Elizabeth Jahnsen has developed the first legal method of cloning. Either villain or savior, she lives a lonely life until Max. When she comes across his double in one of her studies everything unravels.
Come up with a better pitch. I cannot make up my mind.
DeleteTitle: Day of Night
ReplyDeleteCategory & Genre: YA science fiction
Word count: 52,000
Pitch: The year’s 2012 when the sun disappears, causing weather disasters and other worldwide catastrophes. Eighteen-year-old Vanessa, an African-American firefighter, helps her family, friends, and strangers as they fight for survival in a world of darkness.
ohh, glad I was told to return. Please query with the first 15.
DeleteThank you to everyone who pitched. This session is now closed.
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