Tuesday, September 4, 2012

Pitch Madness third submission window now open




The third submission window for
Pitch Madness is now open CLOSED!

Please email your entries to brendadrakecontests@gmail.com

The first 100 entries to hit the inbox will move onto the slush round. We will email confirmations shortly after receiving the entries. If you don't receive an email saying that you made it in, we're sorry but you can still pitch to the agents on September 13 during our Twitter Pitch Party!

Check the hashtag #PitchMadness to see when the submission window has closed.


In case you didn't read the information post, go here for more details and how to format your entry.

Our fabulous slush readers will be reading through the entries through September 6, and we'll post the winners on the 7th for the agents to start reading.


Come back next week to meet the slush readers, agents, and learn the rules of the game. Good luck, everyone!

Sunday, September 2, 2012

Meet the Pitch Madness Slush Readers!



 
 
An event as big as this requires many people working behind the scenes to pull off. In order to open the contest up to more submissions, we kidnapped bribed asked some awesome slush readers to back us up. They'll be up to the ears in entries, searching for the gems and making dreams come true. There's been a lot of success in our prior contests. Could you be next?

Make sure to show our readers some love in the comments and by following their blogs and twitter handles. They may recognize your name in the slush (Ha! Kidding. Shameless way to encourage comments). No seriously, only the best of the best entries will make it into the game.

Introducing our readers...
 



Becca (Becks) Coffindaffer

Becks not only is a professional copy editor, she is also an aspiring author of YA fantasy, specifically contemporary fantasy and not-so-much of the urban variety since she's not terribly urban herself, although like most writers she doesn’t really limit her ideas to one sub-genre. She has a creative writing major from K-State University. And she's co-authoring an exciting new project with Brenda Drake.


Kat Ellis
Kat writes YA sci fi and fantasy, which has so far included: hot dragon boys, giant squid, drug abuse, robots, little people in trilby hats, winged aliens, shuttle crashes, kissiness, evil moths and malicious vomiting. She's represented by Molly Ker Hawn of The Bent Agency.

Stephanie Diaz

Stephanie grew up in sunny San Diego, wishing for rain. She currently studies film production at San Diego State University, but spends most of her study time writing novels. Someday, she would like to hike the trail to Mount Doom. Her work is represented by Alison Fargis of Stonesong.

Dee (@writeforapples)


Dee is a mom, teacher, MG writer, educational freelance writer, blogger. She says kids really do bring apples to their teachers, but they also bring you their smiles, laughter, pride, and sense of wonder- because you inspire them. That’s why she loves being a teacher. That's why she writes. And she's repped by Kerry Sparks of the Levine Greenberg Literary Agency.


Summer Heacock


 

Summer is an aspiring author and avid reader. Her alter ego is Fizzygrrl. She's Super Mommy, Epic Wifey, lover of candy, and geeky things. She's like a Disney cartoon that says the 'F' word a lot.






KT Hanna



KT nabbed her agent, Judith Engracia with the Liza Dawson Associates, in last March's Pitch Madness. KT loves singing and writing music, but above everything else she loves writing. From science fiction to fantasy to horror. She's dabbled in it all and her plotbunnies run around and multiply at will. One of her friends has forbidden her from reading a dictionary, since usually, just one word sets her off. At the moment she has a completed trilogy in draft, with the first book in the series complete.The TDP Trilogy is a YA science fiction series set in the Distant future. It includes mind manipulation, hybrid technology and alien parasites.
Our co-hosts and final readers...


Shelley Watters

 
Brenda Drake
 
 
 

Erica M. Chapman
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
That's it. Come back September 5 and meet the agents.

Saturday, September 1, 2012

Pitch Madness Second Window Now Open



The second submission window for

Pitch Madness is now open CLOSED!


Please email your entries to brendadrakecontests@gmail.com

The first 100 entries to hit the inbox will move onto the slush round. We will email confirmations shortly after receiving the entries. If you don't receive an email saying that you made it in, please try again on the next submission window.

The next submission window is September 4 (Tuesday) at 10AM EDT (NY time).

Check the hashtag #PitchMadness to see when the submission window has closed.

In case you didn't read the information post, go here for more details and how to format your entry.
Good luck, everyone!


Please note: We are hosting TWO great contests today! If you're looking for the Win an Editing Workshop contest, please go here.   

Pitch Madness First Submission Window Now Open


The first submission window for
Pitch Madness is now open CLOSED!

Please email your entries to brendadrakecontests@gmail.com

The first 100 entries to hit the inbox will move onto the slush round. We will email confirmations shortly after receiving the entries. If you don't receive an email saying that you made it in, please try again on the next submission window.

The next submission window is September 1 (today) at 6PM EDT (NY time).

Check the hashtag #PitchMadness to see when the submission window has closed. 

In case you didn't read the information post, go here for more details and how to format your entry.


Good luck, everyone! 


Please note: We are hosting TWO great contests today! If you're looking for the Win an Editing Workshop contest, please go here.  

Win an Editing Workshop

Note: We are hosting TWO awesome (unaffiliated) contests today. If you're looking for the Pitch Madness Entry post, please go here.

Welcome to a new pitch contest with a new, different sort of prize.

Entranced Publishing, a new electronic publisher of YA and romance, is offering up an eight-week online editing workshop (beginning September 17th) to five lucky winners. These five winners will be chosen via a pitch contest here at YAtopia, held in the comments of this post.

The workshop will be hosted by Managing Editor Eden Plantz, who will take participants on an in-depth tour of their own manuscripts from an editorial perspective. At the end of the workshop, Eden will discuss the finer points of querying and will help each author craft a strong cover letter.

In addition, Executive Editor Ashley Christman and Eden will review all entries and will be requesting an as-of-yet undetermined number of manuscripts to be given priority in their slushpile.

The contest is open to YA and NA writers. One entry per person. Post the following information in the comments of this post.

- Name
- Email
- Title
- Age-range & Genre
- Word-count
- Hook (100 words or fewer)

Good luck!

Leave any questions about this contest in the comments.

Tuesday, August 28, 2012

Running on Empty (contest)

To say it's been a crazy summer is putting it mildly. The past couple months I've gone through many highs and lows, both personally and professionally. After awhile, it starts to catch up with you.

It's doing that to me NOW. LOL.

So, if you're anything like me and you're trying to play catch-up. If you've had a ton of things going on and you just need to sit back and breathe a bit, this is the post for you.

I'm giving away an e-copy of my book, MEASURING UP to one random person who comments. To enter just leave a comment on what you do to relax and your email. This is a quickie contest and I'll draw a winner Friday evening at 6:00 PM.


Seventeen-year-old Annabel Conway is tired of the Hillcrest High School elite making her life miserable because she’s not a size two. This summer, she's hiring a personal trainer to help her lose weight.

Annabel doesn’t expect her trainer to be a gorgeous guy around her age. Boys like Tegan are jerks. They pretend to like girls like her so they can make an idiot out of them. Been there, done that. Totally not going there again. She kind of hates him on principal. Blond. Muscular. Funny. It doesn’t help that he knows her measurements!

Soon, Tegan's so much more than that. He’s the boy who teaches her to box when she has a bad day. Who jogs with her and lets her set the pace. Who kisses her until she melts. He makes her feel beautiful regardless of what the scale says. Unlike her mom, he doesn’t expect perfection, and he doesn't try to shield her from the world like her dad and best friend. Tegan likes her the way she is.

But what happens when he’s not there? He can’t always be there…

Will Annabel be able to stand on her own and learn that she already measures up? That her worth doesn’t lie in what the world thinks, the scale says, or even what Tegan tells her—but in herself?

Ready. Set. Enter :)

Monday, August 27, 2012

Pitch Madness is coming!




It's here! Well, not quite yet. The submission windows for the semi-annual Pitch Madness go live on Saturday, September 1 at 12PM EST and 6PM EST.

And we've added another submission time for September 4... 3RD SUBMISSION TIME: 10:00 am EDT (EST-NY time) first 100.

The game theme this time is Paintball. What's Pitch Madness, you ask? Well, its a game where Brenda Drake brings together a bushel of agents to compete for your pitches. We're  joining three other blogs in this funtastic event. So I guess I'll start by introducing them first.


Brenda Drake


Shelley Watters



Erica M. Chapman











Here's the crazy awesome agents participating...

Dawn Frederick - Red Sofa Literary
Brittany Howard - Corvisiero Agency
John Cusick - Scott Treimel NY
Victoria Marini - Gelfman Schneider Lit.
Judith Engracia - Liza Dawson & Assoc.
Louise Fury - L. Perkins Agency
Sarah LaPolla - Curtis Brown Ltd.
Brooks Sherman - FinePrint Literary Management
Molly Ker Hawn - The Bent Agency
We'll have more about the agents up in our Meet the Agents' post coming September 4 and 5.

Now, here's the submission deets ...

Shine up your 35-word (exact-anything over will be disqualified) pitches and the first 150-words (if the cut-off falls in the middle of a sentence, go to the end of that sentence) of your finished Adult, Young Adult, and Middle Grade fiction. We'll pick 60 entries to move on to the Agent Pitch Match.

We've doubled the number of entries we're taking in this time. There will be a percentage of what genres make it in based on all the agents likes. You guessed it, there will be more YA in the contest than Adult, but the main thing we're looking for is the WOW factor. Only one entry per person.

We have two submission times, and this year we're holding it on a Saturday.

The windows open on September 1 ...

1ST SUBMISSION TIME: 12:00 pm EST for the first 100.
2ND SUBMISSION TIME: 6:00 pm EST for the next 100.

Only the best of the best will make it to the final round.

Here's how to format your entry ...
Name: Brenda Drake
Title: The Britanika Journals: Around the World in 80:45:07
Genre: Middle Grade Adventure
Word Count: 50,000



Max and Annika use a transporting globe to find her missing father. With evil men in an airship on their tails, Max must use his sleuthing skills with Annika’s inventor ones to rescue her father.



Maximilian Drayson knew that a masterful sleuth had to pay attention to one crucial thing—the details. He tightened his grip on the white apron he had snatched from the Britanika's laundry room. It took several hours into his investigation to find it, and most would think it was just a soiled apron, but he believed it to be a clue.

He paced the manicured lawn of the Britanika's residence, scratching the back of his neck and searching the ground. This particular mystery came about after he had overheard one of the Britanika's housemaids, Molly, sobbing to another servant about losing her mother's brooch. At hearing Molly's distress, he went into action.

Before beginning his investigation, Max interrogated Molly, asking her a series of questions: When had she last seen the brooch? Did she wear it while she worked? What were her household duties? He needed every bit of information he could obtain if he wanted to mark this case as solved.

For those that don't make it into Pitch Madness we'll be hosting a twitter pitch party on the hashtag #PitMad on September 13 from 8AM to 8PM EST. So get those twitter pitches ready!
That's it. We're so excited!












Guestopia: Gretchen McNeil

Today we have a guest post from Gretchen McNeil, author of Possess and the forthcoming Ten. Check out the bottom of this post for a unique street team opportunity! Take it away, Gretchen!




What is scary?

Is it a giant spider lurking under you bed, just waiting for you to crawl in before it silently creeps out into the darkness of your room to envelope you in it's deadly web?

Is it a waking up to find yourself buried alive in a close, black coffin, utterly sightless in the dark, the only sound a muted thud of shovelful after shovelful of dirt as it's tossed onto your living tomb?

Is it a darkened stretch of forest you must walk through that seems to breathe with living creatures that dart and flutter just out of sight?

Is it getting a flat tire on a deserted mountain road, where the nearest structure for fifty miles is a dilapidated farmhouse that appears to have no phone, cable or electricity lines, just a trickle of smoke rising from a toppling brick chimney?

So many different levels of scary.  The things we fear most come in a variety of shapes and sizes, from the physical – like spiders and sharks – to the esoteric – like claustrophobia and paranoia – to the otherworldly – like demons and vampires and witches (oh my!). 

When I wrote POSSESS, I chose something that I actually found terrifying – demonic possession – and tried to convey that terror to readers who might not have the same sensibilities. In TEN, I wrote about something I don't intrinsically find scary – being trapped on an island with a killer, but also tried to portray the tension and horror.  To me, conveying fear isn't just about describing a situation, object, or person that someone might find scary, but giving a blow-by-blow of the event and actually detailing the fear reaction in the characters. 

We all know exactly what it feels like to be scared.  First you have the anticipation: What's behind that closed door?  What's making that scratching noise in the attic?  What's lurking in the deep, dark waters?  It's the tensing of muscles like you're expecting a blow, that stretching of all your senses, trying to see/feel/hear/smell danger before it pounces on you.  The higher the tension is pitched, the bigger the wallop.

Next, the reveal.  The door opens to expose a dead body that spills out on top of our poor heroine the moment she turns the doorknob.  The scratching noise in the attic inexplicably moves through the ceiling, down the stairs and manifests in a dark, demonic entity.  The dorsal fin of a great white shark breaks the surface of the water in which you're swimming.  The terror has been revealed in one jarring, scream-inducing moment!

But that's not scary enough, not for the expectant reader.  You need the next step in the process – experiencing the fear through the eyes of the main character.  We need to feel their bodies tremble as they break out into a cold sweat.  We need to hear the blood-curdling scream that explodes from their mouths.  We need to internalize the sick, sinking feeling in their stomachs as death closes in around them.

And lastly, the action.  Our heroine's panicked flee from the house, our hero's desperate attempt to out maneuver a man-eating shark.  Will they survive?  Will they escape?  Hearts pound in anticipation with every turn of the page!!!!

What is scary?

The answer, I think, is anything.  If you tell it right.  ;)


Gretchen McNeil is an opera singer, writer and clown.  Her YA horror POSSESS debuted with Balzer + Bray for HarperCollins in 2011.  Her follow up TEN – YA horror/suspense about ten teens trapped on a remote island with a serial killer – will be released September 18, 2012, and her third novel 3:59, sci fi horror pitched as The Parent Trap meets Event Horizon, is scheduled for Fall 2013. 

Gretchen is a former coloratura soprano, the voice of Mary on G4's Code Monkeys and she sings with the LA-based circus troupe Cirque Berzerk.  Gretchen blogs with The Enchanted Inkpot and is a founding member of the vlog group the YARebels where she can be seen as "Monday."


And their doom comes swiftly.

It was supposed to be the weekend of their lives – three days on Henry Island at an exclusive house party. Best friends Meg and Minnie each have their own reasons for wanting to be there, both of which involve Kamiak High’s most eligible bachelor, T.J. Fletcher. But what starts out as a fun-filled weekend turns dark and twisted after the discovery of a DVD with a sinister message: Vengeance is mine.

Suddenly, people are dying and the teens are cut off from the outside world. No electricity, no phones, no internet, and a ferry that isn’t scheduled to return for two days. As the deaths become more violent and the teens turn on each other, can Meg find the killer before more people die? Or is the killer closer to her than she could ever imagine?

Want to help Gretchen get the word out about Ten and win some awesome prizes - including the chance to get your name in her next book? Check out The Army of Ten!


Friday, August 24, 2012

Queries: What agents want

I was helping a writer with her query yesterday (This week I'm co-hosting a query workshop with Brenda Drake, Becca Coffindaffer, and Marieke Nijkamp. Check it out!) and she commented on how it seems agents all want different things out of a query.

Well... yes... and no.

Some things that agents differ on include:
  • Whether to include an intro before your pitch
  • Put things like title, word count, age, genre at the end or beginning
  • How much biographical info to include
  • Whether or not an MFA matters
  • Whether or not to include comp titles and how popular the books you use should be if you do
  • Whether or not to include "I'm querying you because..." info and what kind of info that should be
  • Start with a logline or no?
  • What exactly "personalize your query" means
  • Should you mention your blog/social media presence if it's not rockstar status?
  • Don't be gimmicky - unless it's an original gimmick that works
  • Voice? How much?
  • Should you describe your target audience? Or does that limit it too much, especially if the agent disagrees?
  • Series?
  • I'm sure you can think of many more.

But here are the things all agents agree on:
  • Write a pitch that is intelligible, not mass-emailed, and makes them want to read the book.
  • Don't be crazy.

If you do those two things very very well, guess what? The rest of it doesn't matter. At all.

If your query demonstrates great writing and a great story, you can break every other preference an agent has. (Don't confuse preferences like those list above with guidelines like whether or not to include attachments, pages, synopsis. Always obey those.)

I love writing, reading, and critiquing queries and a lot of people are shocked when I say that, but I think a lot of writers psych themselves out because they're worrying so much about that first list. Focus on the second list, and you're golden.


But if you are worried about that first list still? Here's what I've come up with for playing it safe (not perfect) on each topic so you don't offend anyone outright:


  • Intro before pitch or not: Save it for the end. Why? They don't care about anything else until they care about the book. Unless you're a Kardashian, of course.
  • Put things like title, word count, age, genre at the end or beginning End. Most prefer the end, so it's a numbers game.
  • biographical info Include only hard facts that make it obvious you are serious about your career - MFAs, SCBWI/RWA memberships, good publishing experience. This does not include submission history, how many novels you've written, how long you've written, what your mom/husband/brother/neighbor/CPs think about your work.
  • Whether or not an MFA matters see above
  • Comp titles Unless the agent specifically wants them, leave them out. There is so much that can go wrong with them.
  • "I'm querying you because..." info Do not include info that's like "I'm querying you because you like Urban Fantasies" - they know what they want, you don't have to tell them. Do include things like "I'm querying you with this because you said on twitter you wanted a novel with a three-legged dog that wears purple sun-glasses - and this is it!" This shows you're really paying attention.
  • Start with a logline or no? No, unless specifically requested. And I only say no because so many of them lead to a clunky transition to the pitch.
  • What exactly "personalize your query" means Email only sent to them. Dear [agent name] (don't assume gender if you don't know for sure). If you've met them in person before, mention that (unless you were creepy). If you actually do read their blog, you may mention it if you want - but ONLY if it's true and you can mention something specific you like.
  • Should you mention your blog/social media presence if it's not rockstar status? Not in the body of the query, but include links in your signature. That way, it's there if they want it, but it's not obtrusive.
  • Don't be gimmicky - unless it's an original gimmick that works Don't be gimmicky. Everybody thinks their gimmick is clever, less than 1% of them are. Those aren't good odds.
  • Voice? How much? light. If you write YA, do not use a phrase that a teen wouldn't use. Use adjectives/adverbs and verbs that your MC would use. Avoid cliches. Always write in 3rd person present, no matter what your book is.
  • Should you describe your target audience? Or does that limit it too much, especially if the agent disagrees? Don't. There's so much that can go wrong.
  • Series Don't mention it.

Don't obsess over the small things! A great query has to do one thing: make the agent want to read your book. Period. End of paragraph. End of story.

Thursday, August 23, 2012

Announcing: Win an Editing Workshop

Announcing a new pitch contest with a new, different sort of prize.

Entranced Publishing, a new electronic publisher of YA and romance, is offering up an eight-week online editing workshop (beginning September 17th) to five lucky winners. These five winners will be chosen via a pitch contest here at YAtopia, held on September 1st.  The workshop will be hosted by Managing Editor Eden Plantz, who will take participants on an in-depth tour of their own manuscripts from an editorial perspective. At the end of the workshop, Eden will discuss the finer points of querying and will help each author craft a strong cover letter.

In addition, Executive Editor Ashley Christman and Eden will review all entries and will be requesting an as-of-yet undetermined number of manuscripts to be given priority in their slushpile.

The contest is open to YA and NA writers. One entry per person. The information you should have ready to post on September 7th (on another post that will be posted that day) includes:

- Name
- Email
- Title
- Age-range & Genre
- Word-count
- Hook (100 words or fewer)

Get your pitches ready for the chance to work closely with a professional editor!

Leave any questions about this contest in the comments below!