tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7202274659436317634.post7047782045180332622..comments2023-12-02T05:59:27.143-05:00Comments on YAtopia: Writing Basics: DialogueSM Johnstonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03546994863993080465noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7202274659436317634.post-90802037887918426992013-01-09T11:01:37.978-05:002013-01-09T11:01:37.978-05:00eeps--guess, the last two paragraphs are in 1st PO...eeps--guess, the last two paragraphs are in 1st POV. Sorry, jumped the comment gun. Example B, is much smoother. K. L. Hallamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05672153195378644215noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7202274659436317634.post-2359758027695188412013-01-09T10:59:16.979-05:002013-01-09T10:59:16.979-05:00Interesting. What about first person POV, this get...Interesting. What about first person POV, this gets even trickier, doesn't it? K. L. Hallamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05672153195378644215noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7202274659436317634.post-71691385930318869872013-01-09T10:19:25.451-05:002013-01-09T10:19:25.451-05:00Thanks! Dialogue is so,eying I'm working on, s...Thanks! Dialogue is so,eying I'm working on, so this helps :)SC Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10382410035007943921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7202274659436317634.post-56297720377886966992013-01-09T00:33:46.521-05:002013-01-09T00:33:46.521-05:00Great tips! Dialogue can be tricky. Common problem...Great tips! Dialogue can be tricky. Common problems I see are when it seems forced or unnatural. Example A is like nails on a chalkboard. Thanks for sharing.<br /><br />Peace & Love<br />Crystal @ <a href="http://www.yasociety.com/" rel="nofollow">The YA Society</a> Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03335427276116292574noreply@blogger.com